Saturday, 5 December 2015

Rainbow Snippets


My Silver is curious about what this Rainbow snippets is all about. Well... Every Saturday all members of the group who are authors, will post a six sentence snippet here and then post the link in the group page on Facebook https://www.facebook.com/groups/RainbowSnippets/966491153420947

On Sundays, reader members will check out the snippets and comment on the ones that interest them. So, once you've read my snippet and loved it, go read the others and get your comment head on.

This snippet is from my new book, Shade's Champion which is to be released on 18th December

“Yeah. Yeah there’s good out here.”

Before he knew what he was doing, Dorien had taken Shade’s face between his hands and was kissing him gently. Shade sighed and relaxed into his arms. It felt good. It felt really good. Surely this couldn’t be wrong. It just couldn’t be wrong to feel like this, to feel so... shivery and open and full of... something, and for the first time since he could remember, he just let himself feel, and it was the greatest thing ever.

6 comments:

  1. I love the description of how he's feeling. You did a great job of putting into words that "there aren't any words to describe it" feeling.

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    1. Thank you. Dory's feelings are a big part of the book. When he was younger he was unable to control them and his anger led to people being injured and him being sent to a secure school in lieu or prison. His psychiatrist has concentrated on suppressing the emotions rather than helping him lean to control them with the result he believes it is wrong to have strong emotions, especially toward another person. Shade helps him learn that sometimes it's okay to let go.

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  2. This left me...breathless. Can't wait to get to this part!

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    1. Thank you. This is probably the closest to erotic the book gets and it's a pretty intense scene. It's a key breakthrough for Dory.

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  3. Welcome to Rainbow Snippets! Thanks for posting--nice emotions in this snippet. :)

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  4. Such a sweet moment! Great description here. :)

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